I am really hoping for anyone to give my fic a once-over before I submit it to the femgenficathon. It's a PG fic (and takes place a couple years after "The Amber Spyglass", following an adult Lyra with a few OCs making small appearances (with a few references made to Will). I'm looking for someone to be ruthless with my grammar and rampant tense switches.
Unfortunately, time is an issue as the due date for posting this fic is July 31st. If you do not think you can assist me before then, I understand.
However, if you are interested/available, leave me a comment and I will email you the fic as an attachment. Thanks for your time!